First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning Chinese because I live in China. My native language is English and I grew up in Australia. I enjoy music, travel, nature, ancient Chinese culture, e.g. art, tai chi, tea, etc, exercise for example swimming, reading. 我在学习中文因为我住在中国。我的母语是英文。我在澳大利亚悉尼长大了。我的爱好包括音乐，旅行，自然环境，中国古代文化，比如说艺术，太极，道，茶，等等，锻炼身体比如说游泳，看书。
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I think the sentence"我在澳大利亚悉尼长大了" could write as "我在悉尼长大". Because it is a general knowledge that "Sydney is one of the major cities in Australia". So, in my part of view, "澳大利亚" could be put off. I don't know whether I had made my point in a right way in english. So, I am looking forward for your revise about my commentary. Thank U！
我认为“我在澳大利亚悉尼长大了”这句话写作“我在悉尼长大”更好。因为“悉尼是澳大利亚主要城市之一”是常识，所以，我认为句中的“澳大利亚”一词可以略去不写。我不知道我是否正确的用英文将我的观点表达清楚，因而我十分热烈的盼望您能对我的评论做出修改。谢谢！
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning Chinese because I live in China. My native language is English and I grew up in Australia. I enjoy music, travel, nature, ancient Chinese culture, e.g. art, tai chi, tea, etc, exercise for example swimming, reading. 我在学习中文因为我住在中国。我的母语是英文。我在澳大利亚悉尼长大了的。我的爱好包括音乐，旅行，自然环境，中国古代文化，比如说艺术，太极，道，茶，等等，还包括锻炼身体比如说游泳，看书。
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您的爱好还真广泛
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i can help u to learn Chinese ， buddy come on~
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