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나왔어요~~!! 오늘 내가 좋아하는 아이들의 앨범이 드디어 나왔어요~~~!!! 정말 행복해요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 난 행복했어 잠을수없는 것 같아 ㅋㅋㅋ 여러분 안녕~ 히힛 ^^

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나왔어요~~!!

오늘 내가 좋아하는 아이들의 앨범이 드디어 나왔어요~~~!!!

 

If you use "아이들" as meaning of idol, then you'd better to use "아이돌" because "아이들" means "kids" or "boys".


정말 행복해요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
난 행복했어 잠을수없는 것 같아 ㅋㅋㅋ

 

잠들다 is right word.

"난 행복해서 잠들 수 없을 것 같아" is natural sentence.


여러분 안녕~ 히힛 ^^

 

히힛 ^^

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