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Review of my summer. i there! I used to write on Lang-8 once or twice a week but these two last months I've been a bit busy. I would like to explain what I've been doing these two months. One of my hobbies is travelling and each summer I try to go outside of my country, usually to countries which I can Practice my English so in July I went to England, Oxford specifically. I did an intensive English course so I was quite busy there, though I had every afternoon free so I met lots of people around the world, Japanese, Korean, German, Italian, Brazilian... that was, in my opinion, the best part of the trip because I learnt a bunch of things about other cultures, other languages, different societies. I spent the whole July there, we visited different places in Oxford but even around the country, like Cambridge, London, Bristol, Manchester or Woodstock. But the best part of the story is coming, because I met really good people there, we were really good friends and some of theme, particularly people from out of Europe, wanted to visit other countries and I told them to visit Spain staying in my place so when we finish our trip in England we took a plane to Spain, Valencia concretely, and spent 4 days here, my mother cooked some traditional spanish dishies like Paella, Fideuá and more haha. After those four days we called our new Italian friend and he told us to go there to spend some days in Italy, so we did! We took a plane from Barcelona to Rome. We enjoyed our 5 days there, really good pizzas, lasagnnas and other italian food. We went to Rome, Florence, Milano, Venice... I can say that is a wonderful country. Though the economical situation there is awful, which is a pity... but, at last, is a great country to spend your holidays. And that's it, I've spent month and a half travelling around Europe, which have been the best experience ever. And the best point is that I can go now to Japan and Korea and stay in my friend's home for free :) Thank you for reading! Jorge

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Review of my summer.

Hi there!
I used to write on Lang-8 once or twice a week but these last two months I've been a bit busy. I would like to explain what I've been doing these two months.

One of my hobbies is travelling and each summer I try to go abroad  outside of my country, usually to countries where which I can practice my English. So in July, I went to England, Oxford specifically. I attended did an intensive English course that made me so I was quite busy there. I had every afternoon free though so I met lots of people around from all over the world - Japanese, Korean, German, Italian, Brazilian... that was, in my opinion, the best part of the trip because I learnt a bunch of things about other cultures, other languages, different societies.
I spent the whole July was there the whole of July. We visited different places in Oxford but  and even went around the country, like to Cambridge, London, Bristol, Manchester or Woodstock.

But the best part of the story is coming, because I met really good people there. We became really good friends and some of them, particularly people from out of specially those not from Europe, wanted to visit other countries. I told them to visit Spain and staying in my place so when we finished our trip in tour of England, we took a plane to Spain, Valencia concretely, and spent stayed 4 days there. My mother cooked some traditional spanish dishies like Paella, Fideuá and more haha.

After those four days that, we called our new Italian friend and he told   invited us to go there to spend some days in Italy, so we did! We took a plane from Barcelona to Rome. We enjoyed our 5 days there, really good pizzas, lasagnnas and other italian food. We went to Rome, Florence, Milano, Venice... I can say that Italy is such a wonderful country. Though Even if the economical situation there is awful, which is a pity... but, at last, it still is a great country to spend your holidays.


And that's it! I've spent a month and a half travelling around Europe, which have has been the best experience ever;  and most of all,  the best point is that I can now go to Japan and Korea and stay in my friend's home for free :)

Thank you for reading!


Jorge

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Thanks Indominatable! I appreciate your tip. Actually I use to write long sentences... and sometimes are too long for the reader, making them a bit bored. Thank you, I've to try to solve this!
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The paragraph starting with "but the best part.." is one big sentence. You should break it up into several smaller ones. I didn't try correcting it because I would say it very differently and I didn't want to completely rewrite it.
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Review of my summer.

Hi there!
I used to write on Lang-8 once or twice a week but these two last months I've been a bit busy. I would like to explain what I've been doing these two months.

One of my hobbies is travelling and each summer I try to go outside of my country, usually to countries which I can practice my English so in July I went to England, Oxford specifically. I did an intensive English course so I was quite busy there, though I had every afternoon free so I met lots of people from around the world, Japanese, Korean, German, Italian, Brazilian... that was, in my opinion, the best part of the trip because I learnt a bunch of things about other cultures, other languages, different societies.
I spent the whole July there, we visited different places in Oxford but also others around the country, like Cambridge, London, Bristol, Manchester and Woodstock.

But the best part of the story is coming, because I met really good people there, we were really good friends and some of them, particularly people from out of Europe, wanted to visit other countries and I told them to visit Spain staying in my place so when we finish our trip in England we took a plane to Spain, Valencia concretely, and spent 4 days here, my mother cooked some traditional spanish dishies like Paella, Fideuá and more haha.

After those four days we called our new Italian friend and he told us to go there to spend some days in Italy, so we did! We took a plane from Barcelona to Rome. We enjoyed our 5 days there, really good pizzas, lasagnas and other italian food. We went to Rome, Florence, Milano, Venice... I can say that is a wonderful country. Though the economical situation there is awful, which is a pity... but, at last, is a great country to spend your holidays.


And that's it, I've spent month and a half travelling around Europe, which have been the best experience ever. And the best point is that I can go now to Japan and Korea and stay in my friend's home for free :)

Thank you for reading!


Jorge

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