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correct for me i am looking for a good jobs and i dont know how to write a good letter sent to employee... i prepared a letter , i hope everyone help me to correct this... following me: Dear Madam/Sir I am writing to apply for the receptionist position, your advertisement in www.vietnamworks.com where I found out this recruitment. After that, I am pleased to enclose my C.V to apply for this potion. Please consider this as my application. I just graduated Van Lang University as a business administration majored and I think that this position is fitting young candidate like me. I will become a hard worker in your company if I have a chance to work there I am available for interview at any time. I would appreciate you contacting me at your earliest convenience. I look forward to meeting you. Yours faithfully i hope i will receive your correction as soon as possible

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Hmm, I tried to make it as clean and simple as possible. Let's wait for other replies. They may have better suggestions. Good luck!
 

Dear Madam/Sir:
 
I am writing to apply for the receptionist position as posted on www.vietnamworks.com. I just graduated from Van Lang University as a Business Administration major and I think that this position is fitting for a young candidate like me. I am a people person and can easily communicate with different types of people. I assure you that I will work hard if given the chance  to work for your Company. 


I am available for an interview at any time. Please feel free to contact me at: xxxx or through e-mail: xxxx. I have also enclosed my CV should you wish to know more about my background. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

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