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So much thanks for him How time flys! Two monthes English training has been finished. To my surprise that I've made a great progress in oral English I think. I'm very enjoy my study time on his class. He is our English teacher who is a boy form Washington America He has black skin and a paire of big eyes and he often keeps a plait. He is active and pure-hearted. Especially he is good apprehensive when I showed out my opinion by my poor English. So much thanks for him. Now he has been back home. Best wishes for him and hope his everything goes well.

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So much thanks for him (Better: I'm so grateful for him)

How time flys flies!
Two monthes and my English training has been finished is over.
To my surprise I'm surprised that I've made a great progress in oral English I think.  (This sentence makes sense, but it sounds slightly off to me, I think it would sound better if you took out the "I think" bit because you already said that you're surprised.)
I'm very I've really enjoyed my study time on in his class.
He is our English teacher who is a boy form from Washington America (Better: Our English teacher is a boy from Washington America) Also, we usually specify if it is Washington state or Washington D.C.
He has black skin and a paire pair of big eyes and he often keeps a plait. (Better: He has black skin, a pair of big eyes ond he often keeps a plait.)
He is active and pure-hearted. Especially he is He was especially good apprehensive when I showed out my opinion by my poor English. (I understand what you mean by apprehensive, but it would be better to say understanding)
So much thanks for him.
Now he has been back home. (Did you mean Now he has gone back home?)
Best wishes for him and hope his everything goes well.
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Just a few points: 1. Use 'guy' or 'man' for a male. 'Boy' usually stands for a small kid 2. Do not break into a new line, unless you want to start a new paragraph 3. It is not polite to refer to someone's skin color in a direct manner ('He has black skin'). You usually call such a person as 'African-American' if he is from America. You can also call African people as 'Black', but no direct reference should be made to their skin in your sentences. It's confusing, I know. Cheers.

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