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I am learning the English language, because to know two languages will help a lot of in the future, in my professional life especially. In addition, I can meet a lot of people, because I'd like to travel to another part on the world and the English is the principal language and to know it is very important.
My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Ecuador.
I enjoy linstening to music, dancing, swimming, singing, talking. I love doing these things.

GOOD !!

My notebook

I am learning the English language(no need for comma before because) because to knowing two languages help me a lot of in the future, especially in the professinal life specially. In addition, I can meet a lot of people, because I'd like to travel to another part on of the world and the English is the a principal language and knowing it is too(really) important.
My native languge is Spanish, and I grew up in Ecuador.
I enjoy linstening to music, dancing, swimming, singing and talking. I love doing this things.