First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,_because I want to study abroad one day.
My native languages are Cantonese and Mandarin.
I was born in Foshan county, Guandong, China.,_Guang dong Province,_. 

I like making friends from all over the world and doing playing sports like as,playing badminton,_swimming,_skiing and so on.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English(no need for comma before because)because I want to study abroad one day.
My native language are Cantonese and Mandarin.
I was born in China,Guang dong Province,Foshan county.
I like making friends all over the world and doing sports like as (or such as)playing badminton,swimming,skiing and so on.

Well done! Keep up the great work.