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The new way people spend their weekends. It's been a while since the last time I enjoyed a nice weekend at my friend's. That night after BBQ dinner, we started to talk about Chinese ancient poems. One of my friends is a teacher, this is her area. I have to say it was the most special night I'd ever spent since the day that I awared I was tired of having late nights at bars. So I'm thinking of how I'm gonna spend this weekend in a different way. I've got some imformations from the internet. Apparently, somebody is throwing a movie party at an old house on Heng Shan Road. The theme of the party is 'Watching horror movies at old house', plus,people can have beer and BBQ with scary marks on. That sounds fun. Maybe I will go test my guts. If you have any better suggestion for the weekend, I'll be happy to hear.

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That was really well written. Let me know if you would like detailed explanations for the changes. Your use of "guts" was really close to the way English speakers use it but just a little different. If you've got guts, then you are brave. If you are easily frightened then you have no guts. So if you test your courage, then you are trying to find out if you have the guts to face a scary situation which is just slightly different than testing guts that you know you have. I hope that helps...good job!
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It's been a while since the last time I enjoyed a nice weekend at my friend's. That night after BBQ dinner, we started to talk about ancient Chinese poems. One of my friends is a teacher, this is her area of expertise. I have to say it was the most special night I'd ever spent since the day that I realized that I was tired of spending late nights at bars. So I'm thinking of how I'm gonna spend this weekend in a different way. I've got some information from the internet. Apparently, somebody is throwing a movie party at an old house on Heng Shan Road. The theme of the party is 'Watching horror movies at an old house', plus,people can have beer and BBQ with scary masks on. That sounds fun. Maybe I will go test my courage. If you have any better suggestions for the weekend, I'll be happy to hear them.

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