I need to raise three quality
No one is perfct.I have many shortcomings,too.
First,I haven't enough perseverance,I give up easily.When I learned to play the paino,in the beginning I was very study hard.After a while,I want to give up it.Because it's too hard.Now I have been give up.I know I haven't perseverance.If I am in trouble,I always want others to give me a hand.So I never get success by myself.In the future,I'll have more perseverance and never say give up.
The second is quality is sympathetic.Sometimes I'm selfish.When I met poor people.I never give some money to them.I think there's nothing about me.I usually think about myself.
At last,I need more teamwork.If I want to be a cabin crew,I'll learn to how to work with others better.I know cabin crew need enough teamwork,when the aircraft danger.Because we're a team,we must protect the passengers and save them.
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I need to improve three qualities
No one is perfect._I have many shortcomings,_too.
First,_I haven't don't have enough perseverance,_I give up easily._When I was learning to play the piano, I studied very hard in the beginning._After a while,_I wanted to give it up because it's too hard._Now, I have been given up._I know I haven't don't have perseverance._If I am in trouble,_I always want others to give me a hand._So, I never get successful by myself._In the future,_I'll have more perseverance and never say give up.
The second is quality is being sympathetic._Sometimes, I'm selfish._When I meet poor people,_I never give some money to them._I think there's nothing about me._I usually think about myself.
At last,_I need more to value teamwork more._If I want to be in a cabin crew,_I'll learn to how to work with others better._I know cabin crew needs enough teamwork. When the aircraft is in danger,_because we're a team,_we must (or: can) protect the passengers and save them.
Never give up my friend! :)
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