Should young adults live with or without their family? Whici is better?
I think that young adults should live without their family. I have two reason about that. The one reason is that if they live on their own, they can learn how to do households like washing dishes and cooking. Another reason is that they can know what society is through their life without parents.
If young adluts live alone, they have to do everything that once their parents do for them. They should clean their room, wash dishes and cook meals. If they live with parents, they don't do the kind of things because they don't need to do. As a result, they become adults without any houshold skills. It is very difficult to live without the skills when they are adults. Independence from their parents help young adults in the future because they can get houshold skills.
Young adults understand what society is during their life without their family. They should make many contracts all alone when they live alone. For example, when they move their home, they should let some company tell that they change their home to be able to use gas and electricity. And they also have local government tell that. They 'll do all of these processes by themselves. And through them, they know the stracture of the society. It's important for them to know that because through that, they may have concern about society more.
In short, young adults should live by themselves because they can learn households and society.
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In the part that written in orange, I meant that when you move house, you should phone gas and electricity companies so that you can use gas and electricity. And I also meant that you should go a local government office and should report that you move house. The reason is that your address in the Certificate of residence should be changed. (In Japanese, Certificate of residence is called "住民票"(juminhyo)) That's what I mean. English is difficult for me! :-(
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Should young adults live with or without their family? Which Whici is better?
I think that young adults should live without their family. I have two reasons for reason about that. The first one reason is that if they live on their own, they can learn how to do household chores like washing dishes and cooking. Another reason is that they can know what society is like by living by themselves.(through their life without parents.)
If young adults live alone, they have to do everything that their parents once did for them. They should clean their room, wash dishes and cook meals. If they live with parents, they don't do these the kinds of things because they don't need to do. As a result, they become adults without any houshold skills. It is very difficult to live without these the skills when they are adults. Independence from their parents helps young adults in the future because they can get houshold skills.
Young adults understand what society is during their life without their family. They should make many contracts all alone when they live alone. For example, when they move into their home, they should let some company tell that they change their home to be able to use gas and electricity. And they also have local government tell that. (I don't think I understand these sentences. Maybe you should try one more time. Do you mean "they will be told by companies that gas and electricity costs will have to be paid. Also local government requires money."???
They 'll go through do all of these processes by themselves. And through them, they'll get to know the structure of the society. It's important for them to know that because through that, they may have more concern about society more.
In short, young adults should live by themselves because they can learn some household skills and about how society works. households and society.
This topic is from my TOEFL workbook.
Well written Mami!
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