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Emigrate.
I am a 21 years old student. My only preocupation should be to study.
My family has is in a good economical situation (You could also say "my family is well off") and so I shouldn't have worries. I have anything everything I need to be happy.
But I'm not.
I don't want to sound ungrateful. Here in Chile, a lots of many students protests on the streets claiming asking for a free and better education. I have it, and/yet I don't deserve it.
By For some reason (chemical according to my psychiatrist) I just can't be happy studying.
I study Architecture. and I love architecture. I love arts and love to draw. But I feel that studying is not for me. Despite that, I'm I am a relatively a good student. I'm super/very/really loose, but I have relatively good qualifications/grades, so sometimes I think I'm sort of genius, but I'm not happy :P
Like Hemingway wrote: "Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know."
So, this semester I decided to freeze my career, and go to travel. I have some money saved and I will go on my bike or doing some hitchhiking (I haven't decided yet) to the south of Southern Chile and Argentina. Going camping and getting hungry (This is an imcomplete sentence and might need correction unless this is how you intended it to be).
So Maybe, this way, I can start to appreciate what I have.
Wish me luck, and correct me, please ;)
Take care.
(Picture by me).
Overall, really good writing. Not too many errors that I found. I marked any revisions I made and offered a few suggestions as well. Don't worry, I've felt the same way here in the United States haha so I can relate to this. Good luck and let us know how it goes
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