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everyday passage Today, it's the time that new students will go to our university. With time passing quickly, i became an elder student in our university. And in no more than 2 years, i will leave this school and go to another place. Errr..... By the way, I will go to the company to see the whole way in making medicine. It means i will wake up at 7 am tomorrow. It's impersonal! Besides, i also learned lapanese every 2-3 hours everyday. And i decided to take part in the japanese level exam in December. However it needed a photo like the passport photo, but i lost it. It worried me. Everyday i need to write a passage, but i don't know what can be written next time...

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very sorry to correct it briefly..i will do more careful checking when back home. besides, dont worry about your passport photo. I have put all of your documents in a file bag, including the photo. I will give back to you when we are all back home. :P加油
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Today, it's the time that new students will go to our university.

it was a time for freshmen to start their new semester today

 

With time passing quickly, i became an elder student in our university.

Time flies fast! I have become a senior in campus.

 

And in no more than 2 years, i will leave this school and go to another place.
Errr.....

 

By the way, I will go to the company to see the whole way in making medicine→to see how to make medicine in company. It means i will→need to wake up at 7 am tomorrow. It's impersonal→hard to believe!

 


Besides, i also learned lapanese every 2-3 hours everyday. And i decided to take part in the japanese level exam in December.

Besides, I insisted learning Japanese for 2-3 hours everyday because I need to take part in a level exam for Japanese in December.

 

However it needed a photo like the passport photo, but i lost it. It worried me.

I will need a photo for the exam. I took one of these pictures for passport earlier, however, I lose it now. I am a little worried about it.

 
Everyday i need to write a passage, but i don't know what can be written next time...

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