I hate school

On 9.1 . i will come back to school . in fact . i don't want to go to school . i hate teachers . i hate homework . i hate sun (It'd be more clear to say "the sun,"  说“太阳”更清楚！）. i hate everything in school . but i have to go to school . i want to find a job instead of going to school. in my school . i have a lot of homework to do . you know ,everyone don't doesn't want to do homework until 10 pm, i miss my primary school time . there was no homework . no parents nagging , no exams . no ranking . but i can't come back . so. come on ! you can pass all troubles (You can overcome all troubles!)


(When I was a teenager I dropped out of highschool; I sometimes regret it. I'm very blessed that I live in a country where everyone can go to college at any age, but it's difficult because I'm older than most of my classmates, and had to study many "remedial" classes. I suggest you try and appreciate what you have, there are many people that would love to have your lifestyle.  我青少年辍学高中学教； 我偶尔后悔。 我很幸福我国人什么岁能去大学，可是这很难，因为我同学多数比我小几年，又需要学很多remedial学科. 我推荐你试试珍惜这时间， 有很多人希望能祝你这样的生活方式）

First thing that I see:

You know ,everyone don't want to do homework until 10 pm, i miss my primary school time .

Two sentences here.

You know ,everyone don't want to do homework until 10 pm. , i I miss my primary school time .

[Both have a subject and predicate.  Be careful of run-on sentences...a sentence that has two thoughts in it (just one way to find a run-on)]