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Hi everyone :) Hi everyone! I'm a Biology student and I'm waiting to do an Erasmus soon in UK or USA. I'm really interested in science, I like reading about new discoveries, especially in biology field. Since I was young I developed a passion for learning other languages and today I think English gives you the opportunity to communicate with people from all the countries. I'd like to talk in this language and I'm trying to find someone who can help me to improve, I can help you teaching some Italian in an equal exchange :) Have a good day! (I wonder how many mistakes I made :) )

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First of all, I do agree with Richard - this is better than what you can get from some university students in English-speaking countries. :)

I'll just polish it up as if I were an editor:

 

Hi everyone :)

Hi everyone!
I'm a biology student and I'm waiting to do an Erasmus exchange soon in the UK or the USA.
I'm really interested in science; I like reading about new discoveries, especially in the field of biology. Since I was young I have developed a passion for learning other languages, and these days I think English gives you the opportunity to communicate with people from all the countries.

OK, now you know why the biology field also works. ;) Actually, I'd sooner use in the biological field.

My travel experience says otherwise about the so-called universal usefulness of English, but I understand your perspective. ;)


I'd like to talk in this language and I'm trying to find someone who can help me to improve. I can help you by teaching some Italian in an equal exchange. :)
Have a good day!

(I wonder how many mistakes I made :) )

In practice, very few. :)

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Hii .)
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Thank you for your helpful advice Richard, you're right! ;)
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Nothing much to improve there, Carlotta - you're doing very well. Just two very minor things with the definite article. I would say "especially in the biology field" but "people from all countries". Very tricky but something to do with the biology field being very specific but all countries less so... Ever, Richard

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