On the sidelines of "Tehran non-aligned summit" Hi, Today I decided to write about upcoming event in my country. Our government will host non-aligned summit in next 5 days. In face this summit is abo

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On the sidelines of "Tehran non-aligned summit" Hi, Today I decided to write about upcoming event in my country. Our government will host non-aligned summit in next 5 days. In face this summit is about peace and freedom between countries. The government has been spent a lot of money to advertising their good goals, set upped many posters and billboards cross Tehran streets specially about freedom and they stationed many police checkpoint meanwhile we have no minimum freedom in out country. We even have no access to online blogging services, we have no free journalist or newspaper to impugn*, no disagreement march access at all. We have many political prisoners because of their opinion. Even we are under international embargo and high inflation* and no people has access to writing or speaking about it because of our government threats. Imagine that no website is allowed to forecast* currency price!!!!!!!!!!!! Our leader has bulletproof Mercedes Benz and a great access to many large uncontrolled finance resources but he said our people should be patient about inflation* and embargo :). Nobody know about our state of freedom of expression except my compatriots*. Here, there are some government related people that has access to doing everything even violence and in the other hand there are some regular people that has no access to say Why? Why we have no referendum? Why we should vote to men that you filtered them before? or some cheap expectation like Why we can't dance with my wife in party? Why you want to separate girls and boys in universities or... European, American and other free countries people, Be appreciative of your government with all of your problems. At least you can say why, no one punish you for this kind of minimum expectations... and you government is not really your enemy only because of your personal opinions. * WORD BY AID OF DICTIONARY Attaches caricature from my compatriot : www.facebook.com/mardomak

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We all know that after U.N this is probably the largest international organization which has more than one hundred and twenty member states and observers. Holding the assembly at this scale has definitely an unbearable financial burden =n on our economy which is now in a deeper quagmire following the new round of international sanctions. Moreover, I have been hearing some rumors that the government has granted a substantial amount of money to the nearby residents to go travelling in duration of the summite.the whole Tehran Police Department are an alert and cars are being stopped and searched at numerous checkpoints which are either organized by the Police or Basij. However, it has brought some good results too, proving that this government can deliver the goods if they want to. I never thought that Tehran, the city which has always been down at heel, could ever be this much organized and of course neat and tidy. They have planted flowers and trees by the side of streets and highways and they have also painted the walls which had been left the messy since the revolution. I don't want to deplore the regime for doing such things. On the contrary these actions are really adorable. But I expect them to do it for the sake of their own people too.

On the sidelines of "Tehran Non-Aligned Summit"

Hi,
Today I decided to write about an upcoming event in my country. Our government will host the Non-Aligned Summit for the next 5 days. In fact, this summit is about peace and freedom between countries. The government has been spent a lot of money to advertise their good goals, set upped many posters and billboards across Tehran streets, especially about freedom. They have stationed many police checkpoints. Meanwhile, we don't have even minimal freedoms in our country. We have no access to online blogging services, we have no free journalists or newspapers to hold leaders to account, no recourse to protest marches at all. We have many political prisoners because of their opinions.
We are under an international embargo which has caused high inflation. No one dares to write or speak about it because of our government threats. Imagine, that no website is allowed to forecast currency prices!
Our leader has a bulletproof Mercedes Benz and great access to many large, uncontrolled financial resources, but he said our people should be patient about inflation and the embargo :).
Nobody knows about our state of freedom of expression except my compatriots.
Here, there are some government-related people that have license to do anything, even violence. On the other hand, there are some regular people that have no right to ask Why? Why do we have no referendum? Why should we vote for men that you filtered them beforehand? Or even some cheap expectation like Why we can't I dance with my wife at a party? Why do you want to separate girls and boys in universities or...

People from European, American and other free countries: Be appreciative of your governments with all of their problems. At least you can say why, no one will punish you for these kind of minimum expectations... and your government is not really your enemy simply because of your personal opinions.
* WORD BY AID OF DICTIONARY
The attached caricature is from my compatriot : www.facebook.com/mardomak

I hope these changes accurately reflect what you meant to say. Your dictionary words were all good except for "impugn". It's kind of obscure and awkward. "Accountability" is probably the concept you were thinking of.

Version 2 by myself, please correct this one

Hi,
Today I decided to write about upcoming event in my country. Our government will host non-aligned summit in next 5 days. In fact this summit is about peace and freedom between countries. Iran`s government has been spent a lot of money to advertising their good and moral goals. They 've set upped many posters and billboards cross Tehran streets specially about freedom also they stationed many police checkpoint to preventing any disagreement activity meanwhile we have no minimum freedom in out country!

We're barred from many primary right. Having no access to online blogging services, No right to impugn for Iranian journalist or newspaper, no licence for any disagreement march at all. We have also many political prisoners because of their opinion. They missed their life and their family because they've requested their primary rights.
Even we are under international embargo and high inflation* but no one has access to write or speak about it because of our government threats. For example Imagine that no website is allowed to forecast* currency price!!!!!!!!!!!! The government beleive that is a threat for aour society to making people nervous.
Our leader government first person has bulletproof Mercedes Benz and a great access to many large uncontrolled finance resources but he said our people should be patient about inflation* and western countries embargo!!!! It's so funny:).
Nobody know about our state of freedom of expression except my compatriots*.
Here, there are some government related people that has access to doing everything even violence and on the other hand there are some regular people that has no access to say Why?

Why we have no referendum?

Why we should vote to men that you filtered them before?

or some cheap expectation like:

Why we can't dance with my wife in a party???

Why you want to separate girls and boys in universities or...

European, American and other free countries people, Be appreciative of your governments even with all of your problems. At least you can say why, no one punish you for this kind of minimum expectations... and your government is not really your enemy only because of your personal opinions.

Kiss you love, embrace him/her, dance with him/her in everywhere that you like but know these are a crime in some countries including Iran.

Attaches caricature is from my compatriot : www.facebook.com/mardomak

At second line I made a typo mistake. I've wrote "In face" which I mean "In fact"

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