我的很长旅游
明天我和我朋友会去美国横过。我们会六个国横过。十天旅游。天气会很晴朗可是冷一点。我带来很多毛衣和牛仔裤。 我们想看一场音乐会。这个乐队我们非常喜欢。我祝我们很好玩和有安全旅游。
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我的长途旅行(long trip?)
明天我和我朋友会穿越美国(Across the USA?)。我们会穿越六个国家(go through six countries?)。十天的旅途(trip)。天气会很晴朗可是有一点冷(a little bit chill?)。我带来很多毛衣和牛仔裤。我们想看一场音乐会。这个乐队我们非常喜欢。我希望我们可以玩得尽兴和旅途平安(have fun and have a safety trip ?)。
What the ****?
Are you guys going to have fun without me ?
Ok , fine ! ENJOY
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我的長途旅行
明天我將和我的朋友來一趟為期十天，橫跨美國六州的境內旅行。
這個時節天氣雖然晴朗，可是仍然帶有寒意，因此我帶了很多件的毛衣和牛仔褲以備禦寒。
我們計畫在途中去聽一場音樂會，因為主演的樂團是我們的最愛。
且祝我們玩得盡興，一路平安吧。
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看Liz的修改，觉得很有趣。^_^ 我开始也没想到美国的夏天会有需要很多毛衣的那种冷。看naifen的解释才知道原来是要去山区。
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You're welcome! :) Keep warm, when you get to certain height of the mountain, the temperature cools down even in the summer. I got stomach flu few days ago, when we went to mountain hiking above altitude only approximately 1500-1800m, it was about 62 deg. Fahrenheit at night. Not cold and I thought I was healthy enough, but I was sick of the good weather. Anyway, take care and have fun. :)
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我的长途旅游
明天我和我朋友会去美国旅游。我们会去六个国家旅游。旅游十天。天气会很晴朗可是有点冷。我带来很多毛衣和牛仔裤。 我们想看一场音乐会。这个乐队我们非常喜欢。我祝我们的旅游会很好玩很安全。
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