First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to go abroad.
My native language is Persian and I grew up in Iran.
I enjoy listening to the music, swimming, dancing, etc.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am learning english because i want to go abraod
my native language is persian and i grew up in iran
i enjoy litsen to the music swiming dancing and ect

I am learning English because I want to go abroad. My native language is Persian, and  I grew up in Iran. I enjoy listening to music, swimming, dancing, and other things. (You can't really use et cetera [spelled etc.] here--it isn't really used conversationally)