First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to study abroad and make frends from foreign countries. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Guangdong, China. I like reading very much. I also enjoy drawing and listening to music.

This is well written with excellent grammar, but don't forget the rules of punctuation spacing.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to study abroad and make friends form from foreign countries. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Guangdong, China. I like reading very much. I also enjoy drawing and listening to music.

Good choice of words, however you must insert a space after commas and periods. There were a couple spelling errors, and "Guangdong" is a proper noun. Keep it up.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English,because I want to study abroad and make frends form foreign countries. My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in Guangdong,China. I like reading very much. I also enjoy drawing and listening to music.

Great job with this entry very minor mistakes made. I did find however, that you didn't add a space the period and the word of the next sentence. Other than that it well written.