Why do people attend college or university?
I think people go college or university for two reasons. One reason is that they want to get new knowledge. Another is that they want to find more deeply what they are interested in.
people who enter college or university want more inteligence. While they are in the schools, they get new knowledge about various things they want to study. In there, there are many lectures and through them, they can know what they didn't know. And there are many professors who have deep inteligence in specific field. They can discuss with them in their lectures and improve their thought knowledge. They can learn new things through the lectures.
College or university students can find subject they want to study more through many events held in there. They have opprtunities that they can know new theme. For example, they should take some specific lectures whether they like it or not. And they increase knowledge about them. And they may like them at the end. Lectures in there make them study various things and they can work out what they are interested in or not. They can decide their academic theme through the life as a student. They might make some friends in same major and can talk what they want to study each other. Through the conversation, they can find crearly that they should study when they are in postgraduation. Students recognise what they want to learn through their campus life.
In short, people attend college or university because they want to grow new knowledge and find out what they are interested in.
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You're right. It should be "go to university". I missed that mistake. Sorry.
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why not "go to university" but go university. I can't undersand it, can you help me?
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Thank you very much for correcting my entry! It's easy for me to understand your explain and I can gain much new knowledge. And as you pointed out, "academic theme" means academic field.
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I corrected your entry so that some of the sentences flowed better. I realize I didn't explain a lot of the changes. Sorry. Please ask me any questions you have about any of the corrections I've made. I hope I can be of further help.
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Why do people attend college or university?
I think people go college or university for two reasons. One reason is that they want to gain new knowledge. Another reason is that they want to discover (to a greater extent) what they are interested in.
People who enter college or university want to be more intelligent. While they are in the school, they gain new knowledge about various things they want to study. In there, there are many lectures and through them students can know what they didn't know before. There are many professors who have deep intellect in specific fields. They can speak with students in their lectures and improve students' thinking. Students can learn new things through the lectures.
College or university students can find subjects they want to study more through many events held there. They have opportunities through which they can know new themes. For example, they should take certain lectures whether they like it or not. And they increase their knowledge about them. They may like them in the end. Lectures there make them study various things and they can find out what they are interested in or not. They can decide their academic theme (do you mean academic field?) through their life as a student. They might make some friends in the same major and can talk about what they want to study with each other. Through the conversation, they can find clearly that they should study post-graduation. Students recognise what they want to learn through their campus life.
In short, people attend college or university because they want to gain new knowledge and find out what they are interested in.
This topic is from my TOEFL workbook.
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