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头发!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
我有自然直发但是我烫我的发了两年前( ?? )。 (我本来有着自然的直发,但是在两年前我烫了头发。)
因为我三次烫了所以伤头发了。 (因为我烫了三次发,所以伤头发了。)
凡今我真想还直发还有我头发长。 (如今我真想变回原来的直发。还是原来的头发长。)
这个冬天我得去美发厅(~~~~ ?? )。 (这个冬天我得/要去美发厅)
I have naturally straight hair but I permed it 2 years ago because I wanted some change in my hairstyle. But because I permed it several times, my hair is damaged a lot. So now I wanna go back to my natural hair and it is kinda long now.
I might go to a salon this winter when my hair grows longer :).
头发!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
我是自然直发但是两年前我烫了我的头发了( ?? )。
因为我烫了三次所以伤头发了。
但今我想还(huan)原直发还有我头发长(zhang)长。
这个冬天我得去美发厅(~~~~ ?? )。
I have naturally straight hair but I permed it 2 years ago because I wanted some change in my hairstyle. But because I permed it several times, my hair is damaged a lot. So now I wanna go back to my natural hair and it is kinda long now.
I might go to a salon this winter when my hair grows longer :).
头发!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
我有自然直发但是我烫我的发了两年前( ?? )。
我有自然的直发,但是我两年前烫了头发。
因为我三次烫了所以伤头发了。
因为我烫了三次,所以伤到了头发。
凡今我真想还直发还有我头发长。
所以我真想变回长长的直发。
这个冬天我得去美发厅(~~~~ ?? )。
等我的头发再长一点的时候,我就去美发店美发。
I have naturally straight hair but I permed it 2 years ago because I wanted some change in my hairstyle. But because I permed it several times, my hair is damaged a lot. So now I wanna go back to my natural hair and it is kinda long now.
I might go to a salon this winter when my hair grows longer :).
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