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Introducing myself HAHAHA!~
Hey guys~
I'm come from Hong Kong and I'm just 17.
You may say 'I come from' or 'I'm from', mixing both is not correct ;)
I am learning English ,because in Hong Kong every students should learn it but my english is not (quite) so good .
Saying 'quite' is not completely wrong, however it sounds strange on its own, so say 'not so good' or 'not quite so good'.
So, I hope you can help me to improve my English.
At the same time In return, I also will (also) teach you (Putonghua) Mandarin or Cantonese ~ ^^
'Also' should come after 'will' in this sentence, you can however, if you wish, form the sentence without it: 'I will teach' & 'I will also teach' are both correct.
Finally, while learners of Chinese will know what you mean by 'Putonhua' it's usually better to say 'Mandarin' :)
Well done all in all! :)
Welcome to italki by the way!
Introducing myself HAHAHA!~
hey guys~ I'm come from hong kong and i 'm just 17. i am learning English ,because in hong kong every students should learn it but my english is not quite good . so, i hope you can help me to improve my english .At the same time , i also will teach you Putonghua or Cantonese ~ ^^
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