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Back Home!
After 16+ hours driving from WA, last night I finally got home into CA last night.
It surely was really fun to stay there, but home is the best place to stay, after all:)
(You can also say: but, after all, home is the best place to stay. but as you have it, no need for comma.)
Before leaving there WA, I barely finished the English novel and the Korean textbook that I was working on, but and I could not even start Mushishi :( Maybe I will go to the local library to see if they have the series or not.
(I'd use couldn't instead because it is shorter and easier to say)
Summer is almost over. Now it's time to resume the my daily life and get ready for the fall projects!
I'd leave out the 'the' in "the daily life" because it sounds as if there is a specific one everyone does, when really everyone's is different so I changed it to "my" instead. And for "the fall projects", I took out "the" because it makes 'fall projects' specific, like ones you do every fall or ones you already know about or that we as a reader should know about. So I took it out so it would read more like: you are starting on new projects for the fall and you will add more probably.
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