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my grandma's home My grandma's home is in Guiyang,China. Guiyang is a good place .The weather is cool ,very cimfortable,so many people come here to spend thier summer vecation.And there's food also is very yummy~~~ I like Guiyang. And welcome to Guiyang. In my grandma's home ,my grandparents very very love me so i am very thankful.

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I have corrected your note. I hope it helped. :) Please follow me back, I want to learn chinese.. Thank you very much! :)
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my grandma's home. My grandma's home is in Guiyang,China. 

 

Guiyang is a good place .The weather is cool ,very cimfortable comfortable, so many people come here go there 

( Dont write "come here" because you are not in Guiyang. You could write "come here" if you were writing the letter from Guiyang. )

to spend thier their summer vecation.

 

  

"Hope this helped.. :)  "

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Very well :)
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my grandma's home

My grandma's home is in Guiyang,China.
Guiyang is a good place .The weather is cool ,very comfortable,so many people come here to spend thier summer vecation.And there're some foods also is very yummy~~~ I like Guiyang. welcome to Guiyang.
In my grandma's home ,my grandparents very very love me so i am very thankful.

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