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Every term, there are some unlucky boys are→being forced to do this thing→many of these affairs, however, every term I was always in there→among them! I feel it’s unfair, I think!  

There were several unclucky guys being forced to do many of these affairs in each class. However, I was always among them. I felt it was really unfair!

Grammar: 

1. There are sb being forced to do sth “There be 句型的被动语态”

2. many of these affairs 很多这类事情；one of these affairs 这类事情中的一个

Beyond those→In addition, with the ending of→after taking books, I will→would take a party with my roommate. And after a discussion/discussing, the other→another roommate agreed that I only needed to→could take only/just 200yuans.The rest money were average divided by them! I thought it was the only thing lucky today!

In addition, we would hold a dorm party together later. And during our discussion, one of my roommates suggested that I could take only 200Y this time. They would pay for the rest averagely. Well, I felt it was an only luck for me today.

Grammar:

1. 在描述事举例时

what's more/what was worse

in addition/in addition to that/besides/apart from that

2. discuss 是动词，discussion是名词 （After discussing）

3. pay for the rest averagely 平均支付剩余的

Summary：

1. 时态问题：记日记 过去式；日记中若出现将来动作，要用过去将来时（第三遍讲）

2. “的”问题： 尽量不要用…S'…（尽量用A of/in/with B....）（第二遍讲）

3. 代词问题：善于用代词them/it/he/she/they等等 不然句子太罗嗦（第三遍讲）

4. 造句问题：主语、谓语、宾语、状语（每个句子都要这样想，不能按汉语语序翻译）

there are lack of people（主+谓+宾？there能当主语？）

the book was far from where we lived（主+谓+宾 ？book可以比较远近距离么？）

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Today I am→was too busy to write a good passage! Immediately, I will→would go to take part in an activity with my roommate.As his word, he told me this activity will be→ it would be hold→held by his sisters, while→but there are lack of some→few people were there! So that it was necessary for him to invite some students to join this activity!

I was too busy to write a good passage today. I would take part in an activity with one of my roommates. He told me it was held by his sisters and few people were there.He would like to invite some students to join it.

Grammar:

1. 记日记时，过去时态！(第三遍说了)

2. “立即，马上” i will go there immediately. 很少说，（immediately,……）

3. “去参加” i will take part in……（我将要参加……）而go to take part in太罗嗦了

4. 注意代词的使用，可以用it来代替activities

5. be held （hold的过去式）

6. 表示“转折”大多数时候用but,however...

   while 只是用来连接两个表示对比的句子 you are nice while he is bad.

7. there are lack of some people... 错句分析！！

 “那里缺一些人” （这是中文的表达方式，主语，谓语，宾语分别是？）

“那里的活动缺一些人”→“那里的活动缺一些人参加” →“很少的人参加那里的活动”

（很少的人→主; 参与→谓；那里的活动→宾）

few people took part in it./ few people were there/

there are few people joining it.

8. “所以"== "so/therefore" 

    “...so that...”=in order to do sth表示目的，为了...

you need to do sports so that you can be healthier.

Lucky or not→Unfortunately, he chose so that I am→was forced to participate in this activity when I was actually busy.Besides→What was worse, after this activity→it, the other→another roommate asked me to take this term’s book→bring books of this term to class. The book was placed far away from where we lived, so it’s necessary for taking→to bring those books to class!

Unfortunately, I was forced to participate in it when I was actually busy. What was worse,another roommate asked me to take new books of this semester. There were placed far away. Therefore I needed to bring them to the class.

Grammar:

1. 在描述糟糕的事情时，可以用what was worse， 表示又一件糟糕的事

2. one...the other表示”一个“和“二者之中另一个”...当你的roommate为多人时，应该用a roommate...another roommate...

3. “的”→ A of B   尽量不要用....s'....（第二遍说）

4. it's necessary to do sth. 

5. 错句分析

The book was far from where we lived..  

A（地点） is far away from B(地点)..."

中文→（书）离（我们住的公寓）很远” ：“书”如何和“地点”比较远近？

应该是：“书放置的地方”离“我们的公寓”很远 

the book is putted in a place far away from where we lived.

the book is placed (在某个地方……)far away(……某个地方)

the book is placed far away 最简洁！