Could you chek it? ( What should a government do for a country to become successful?)
Why some people leave native land? Main problem for many countries is emigration. There are a lot of causes. People should live, where they were born, else som countries will be overcrowding. Due to the fact that Goverment doesn`t do enough for normal living people, there is low birthrate. And as a concequence these countries are undeveloped.
With the purpose of stop emigration , steps would be taken to solve problem, witch have every country. The situation could be improved, if Goverment took care of population. It might be build a lot of healthy zones, for example, swimming pools, parks. People will now that a Goverment looks after their healthy. Thus People won`t want to leave a native Land.
Also it would solve a problem, if a Goverment helped some people with searching work. Serious attempts to prevent unemployment must be made. For example, creare special organisations.
Folk will not live in country, where they can not find work, or have to stay on Street. Everybody need to have mony, and if it don`t work, what shell they do? Usually murders are happened.
To live in a calm country better than in cruel.
Medicine must be develop immediately. As you observe, every developed country have Medicine at highest level. Population will live longer. And people, who have serious disease sould be under specical keeping. It is the mainest solution of the problem.
By using these solutions, a Goverment can ensure that problem of emigration will be solved. I think, it is mainest problem of the World. We ought to help Goverment, hint at badly life. If we follow these advice, we will get a wonderful land.
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Could you chek it, please? ( What should a government do for a country to become successful?)
Why do some people leave their (native land/ motherland) ? A major problem for many countries is emigration. There are a lot of causes (which is caused by many things). People should live, where they were born, else some countries will be overcrowded. Due to the fact that the goverment isn't doing enough for the people, birthrates are low. And as a concequence these countries are undeveloped.(arguable even countries with a small population can be well developed, but if you re talking about russia, then try hinting at it in a manner less conspicuous)
With the purpose of stoping emigration , steps would be taken to solve the problem, which have every country has. The situation could be improved, if goverments took care of their people. They can build healthy zones (?!?!), for example, swimming pools, parks. People will know that a Goverment looks after them. Thus People won`t want to leave their native Land.
Also it would solve a problem, if the Goverment helped some people with searching for work (/jobs). Serious attempts to prevent unemployment must be made. For example, by creating special organizations.
Folk will not live in a country, where they can not find a job, or have to stay on the street. Everybody needs to have money, and if they don`t work, what shall they do? Usually murders are happened.
To live in a calm country is better than living in cruel one.
Medicine must be developed immediately. As you can observe, every developed country has Medicine (a healthcare system) at the highest level of the highest quality. Populations will live longer. And people, who have serious diseases sould be under specical keeping (do you mean quarintine). It is the mainest most principal solution of the problem.
By using these solutions, a Goverment can ensure that the problem of emigration will be solved. I think, it is the main problem of the World. We ought to help our goverment,(improve our standards of living) hint at badly life ?!?. If we follow this advice, we will get a wonderful land will most surly improve our lives.
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Chelpanova, a piece of advice you are free to take however you want... It is much easier to convey an idea if you write it down in your native language then try to slowly translate the contents of your entries into your best English.
What you have just wrote down is basically that people should not leave their motherland, and that you can solve that "problem" by funding the research of "medicine". Yes healthcare is important but if you want to improve your piece you better do a little research into what you have just posted.
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