Corrections · 3
MY CORRECTION TO YOUR SENTENCES ABOVE IS DONE BY THE UNDERLINE BACKGROUNG, WITH SKY BLUE COLOR AND I HOPE IT WILL HELP YOU A BIT.
GOD BLESSED.
I love [the way you]r think
Your reflection [or thinking] is very good, I think so (I think as you). [I think the same as you].
Nowadays, we live fast.
I work full time and I have a big house to tidy up, so I haven't got time.
[I do not have much time because I have a big house to tidy up [or to clean] and I work full time].
Often my daughter [My daughter often] asks me to play with her, but I referring to another day [always postpone].
When I look at the wildlife, I feel a great nostalgia for his contacts.
Recently I went to run (footing), I dind't do it for long time. [after a long time, I went running].
The place where I live is very nice and it is surrounded by hills. and while I was running uphill along a road, [As I ran up along the road,] I saw the [sunset] sun went down (sunset) and the wind caressed my face.
I felt [had] a great [or a lot of] joy (heppiness) and a great feeling [or deep sense] of freedom.
Thinking of this [that] emotion, I'm [I am] moved [or touched] because me every day without so many little things that give meaning to life. [by these little things that give meaning to every day life].
I love the way you think
The way you think is very good, I think the same, I think as you.
Nowadays we live fast.
I work full time and I have a big house to tidy up, so I haven't got time.
My daugther often asks me to play with her, but I usually postpone it for another day. (or: I usually tell her we will do it some other day.)
When I look at the wildlife, I feel a great nostalgia for its contact. (or maybe better: I feel nostalgic and want more contact with it).
Recently I went running, but I didn't do it for a long time. (Or maybe you wanted to say something like: Recently I went for a short run.)
The place where I live is very nice, it's surrounded by hills and while I was running uphill along the road, I saw the sun go down (sunset) and the wind caressed my face.
I felt great joy (happiness) and a great feeling of freedom.
Feling this way, I'm moved because every day I'm without so many little things that give meaning to life.
:-D
Brava Marian!
Just keep running!
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