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China flagsmile zhang
hey,spoken english my dear spoken english,although you always abandon me,i will still love you until the world is over.i will survive you and let you shine in the sun and feel warm.fight with you,finally live with you happily！love you,love you,love you~(*^__^*)

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my dear spoken english,although you always abandon me,i will still love you until the world is over.i will nurture you and let you shine in the sun and feel warm.fight with you,finally live with you happily！love you,love you,love you~(*^__^*)

 

Great entry, very poetic! Since it seems like poetry I didn't correct the capitalization. Similarly, normally we would say "I will fight with you..." but here the ellipsis works.

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hey you! Spoken English

My dear spoken English, although you always abandon me, I will still love you until the world is over. I will survive you and let you shine in the sun and feel its warmth. Fight with you and finally live with you happily！love you, love you, love you~(*^__^*)

 

Punctuation:  Spaces after fullstop, comma.  Capitals for 'I' and porper nouns.  Funny! can you think of English as a living thing?

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Hey,spoken English!

My dear spoken English, although you always abandon me, I will still love you until the world is over. I will survive_and let you shine in the sun and feel warm. I will fight with you, but we'll finally live happily！Love you, love you, love you~(*^__^*) ...Your spoken English is lucky to have you as a friend!! :D

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