GOD looks the center in man not the appearance
I agree with your opinion.
Especially, anybody can make a big step by learning about the instruments everyday.
It is hard for young people to learn steadily.
The most important thing is there will.
No matter how the instrument is easy to handle, we have a serious posture.
I want to a good player.
I think the passion to GOD is more important than outstanding ability.
Beacause GOD looks the center in man not the appearance.
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God looks the center in man (at the heart/at the inside), not at the (outward) appearance.
I agree with your opinion.
(Especially), anybody can make a big step (alternatively: a progress) by learning about the instruments everyday. (Did you mean: learning to play the instruments ?)
It is hard for young people to learn steadily (regularly).
The most important thing is there (their) will.
No matter how easy is the instrument to handle, we have to have a serious posture.
I want to be/become a good player.
I think the passion is more important to GOD than the outstanding ability, because God looks the center in man (at the heart/at the inside), not at the (outward) appearance.
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Are you a christian? Because you sound like one. :)
If you are that's great.
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