My Weekend Today is Saturday and I stay at home for a whole day.After for a week working ,now what I want to do is just staying . So I got up when I woke up naturally at 8 o’clock,didn’t need to work

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My Weekend Today is Saturday and I stay at home for a whole day.After for a week working ,now what I want to do is just staying . So I got up when I woke up naturally at 8 o’clock,didn’t need to work make me feel happy in the morning .After rinsing my mouth and washing the face ,I ate breakfeast which is just some prepared food . Then I made a cup of tea.While drinking the tea ,I thought about what I want to do.First ,I wanted to practice the callipraphy which let my mind become quiet.For about one and a half hours later,I read a English poetry of Tagore which take me a long time to understand.So I bought his English-Chinese poetry anthology on the net then which made me happier. After lunch ,I saw the TV show China Voice which I love but it was not so good today !Then I took a nap for a while.Later,I opened my laptop and began to surf on the internet until my friend called me out. This Saturday is so casual and easy but it is comfortable to me . So,how about your weekend? Amazing ?

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My Weekend

Today is Saturday and I DECIDED THAT I WILL stay at home for a whole day.After for a week working ,now what ALL I want to do is just staying . So I got up when I woke up naturally at 8 o’clock,didn’t need to work make me feel happy in the morning SO WHEN I WOKE UP AT 8:00, AND REALIZED I DON'T HAVE TO WORK I FELT HAPPY. .After rinsing my mouth and washing the face ,I ate breakfeast which was is just some prepared food . Then I made a cup of tea.While drinking the tea ,I thought about what I want to do.First ,I wanted to practice the callipraphy which lets my mind become quiet.For about one and a half hours later,I read a THE English poetry of Tagore which TOOK take me a long time to understand.So I bought his English-Chinese poetry anthology on the net then which made me happier.
After lunch ,I saw the TV show China Voice which I love but it was not so good today !Then I took a nap for a while.Later,I opened my laptop and began to surf on the internet until my friend called me out.
This Saturday is WAS so casual and easy but it is WAS comfortable to me .
So,how about your weekend? Amazing ?

My Weekend

Today is Saturday and I will stay at home for the whole day. After for a week working, now what I want to do is just stay in. So I got up when I woke up naturally at 8 o’clock. I didn’t need work to make me feel happy in the morning. After rinsing my mouth (brushing my teeth?) and washing my face, I ate breakfeast which was just some prepared food. Then I made a cup of tea. While drinking the tea, I thought about what I wanted to do. First, I wanted to practice the calligraphy, which lets my mind become quiet, for about one and a half hours. Later, I read the English poetry of Tagore which took me a long time to understand. So I bought his English-Chinese poetry anthology on the net which then made me happier.
After lunch, I saw the TV show China Voice, which I love but it was not so good today! Then I took a nap for a while. Later, I opened my laptop and began to surf on the internet until my friend called me to go out.
This Saturday is so casual and easy but it is comfortable to me.
So, how about your weekend? Amazing?

Put the punctuation right after the word, then leave a space. If you only read one poem, then write "I read an English poem of..." If you read more than one, the plural form is "I read the English poetry of..."

You only made one spelling error. The conjugation of verbs is very difficult for native speakers of languages that don't. Practice will improve your mastery.

@Joseph Derflinger:Thank you very much!

Hi Shuang, When writing English, always make sure you use spaces after your commas and periods. For example: WRONG WAY: "morning .After rinsing" CORRECT WAY: "morning. After rinsing" WRONG WAY: "Later,I opened" CORRECT WAY: "Later, I opened"

Shuang you are mixing tenses. Use past tense throughout the narrative. You write some in the present and some in the past.

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