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The finally reason i thought was that the rest time going to sleep was changed from home to school. I usually went to sleep at 3 or 4o'clock in→at home, while it is 1 o'clock in school.
Finally, my rest time changed from home to school. I went to bed at 3 or 4am mostly at home while only 1am at school.
Grammar:
1. at home/school....要注意使用at
2. 描述原因时:firstly, secondly,thirdly,finally, 或the final reason(不是finally reason)
Finally, i decided if i could not go to sleep→fall asleep, i would not go to sleep→bed. With a whole day asleep→awake, i think i will go to→fall sleep very soon at night.
Therefore I decided not to go to bed if I cannot fall asleep. After being awake all day, I think I will fall asleep very soon at night.
Grammar:
睡觉的几种表达
fall asleep 入睡(指“睡着了”那一点的动作)
be asleep 睡了 (指“睡着了”那个状态)
sleep “睡”的持续动作(have slept for 2 hours)
go to bed 去睡觉(我要去睡觉)
I think the best way to adjust time difference is awake all day.^.^
Summary:
1. 要注意睡觉的几种表达方式,入睡/睡着了/去睡觉
2. 分析原因时,句型运用 firstly/secondly/……; the reason is A; sth is caused by B
3. until用在肯定句中是指一直在干什么;not……until 是一直都没有干直到某一刻
4. 注意介词的用法。 at school/at home
5. 描述时间、天气直接用it is...千万别说 the weather is ,,,, the time is,,,,
Wrong Correct
I could not sleep well yesterday, and went→did not fall to sleep→asleep until 5 o'clock. I see there are many reasons.
I did not sleep well last night. I did not fall asleep until 5 o'clock. There are many reasons.
Grammar:
A. until (表示一直持续着的动作)与 not until(一直没有,直到这时才开始)的区别
1. 我昨晚打游戏打到早上5点钟: i played computer games until 5:00am (表示一直在做)2. 我昨晚直到11点钟才打上游戏 i did not play computer games until 11:00pm.( 表示一直没做,到了5点才做)3. 我昨晚直到5点才睡觉 i did not fall asleep until 5:00am. 一直没睡觉,直到5点
B. 睡觉
1. 表示“入睡” i fell asleep at 9pm; 2. "睡了3个小时" I have slept for 3 hours;
3."我睡着了" i am asleep 表示一个状态
First→firstly, the weather→it in dormitory was much hotter than home in dormitory. So once i went to sleep, no more than 1 hour I would get awake→wake up by the weather. It→I feel→felt so bad.
Firstly, it was much hotter in dormitory. I would wake up less than one hour after falling asleep. I felt so bad.
Grammar:
1.描述天气时,用it. 不能说the weather is nice/bad/hot. 只用说 it is much hotter in dormitory.描述时间时,也是用it it's 8am.
2. 起床/醒来:wake up/get up 不说 get awake i am awake 是形容一个状态。
The second reason i thought was mainly caused by some roommates' snore.Last term if someone made→began to snore, i would take my mp3→wear headphone of my mp3 player immediately.
The second reason is snore from my roommates. Last term, I would wear headphone of my mp3 player immediately if one begins to snore.
Grammar:
1. 描述“原因”时句型:
1) the reason is A(原因作主语); i think the reason is A
2) B is caused by+(某个原因)
而不能说 (the reason is caused by+某个原因 )
2. 戴耳机 wear the headphone
3. snore的用法 可以做名词
The room is full of snore. 充满鼾声
一般做动词。 he snores/please dont snore/begin to snore...不要再打鼾了/开始打鼾
Along with the music, I would go to sleep→fall asleep very soon. However, I don't have any mp3 player this term, which means i must bear the other people's snore→the sound of snoring. I think if there is→i get a new mp3 player, i will go to sleep→fall asleep very quickly.
the music, I would fall asleep very soon. However, I have lost it already. It means I need to bear their snore/the sound of snoring. I think I will fall asleep very quickly if I get a new mp3 player.
1. mp3 player ---------MP3播放器
2. along with the music.......伴随着音乐
3. “if there is a mp3”...用 if i get a mp3 player...强调我得到了一个mp3, "there is a mp3"更多强调了这个mp3 player的存在,但未必是你的。
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