First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm studying English to finish my masters degree in the UK.
I'm from South Korea and my hometown is Busan.
My native language is Korean. My hobby is drawing since my major is product design. I really love my major :) 

Normally we would say masters degree rather than master degree. But, I am not sure about the meaning of your first sentence. Are you already in the UK? If you are, then it's OK. But, if you aren't, then it would be better to say: I'm studying English to so I can finish my masters degree in the UK. 

Which University do you want to study at? I study at the University of Sheffield.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm studying English in order to finish my master's degree in the UK. I'm from South Korea and my hometown is Busan. My native language is Korean. My hobby is drawing since my major is product design. I really love my major. :)

I visited Busan a few years ago. I took the boat there from Japan (where I lived). I found that almost nobody spoke English in Busan. In order to communicate with the people there, I had to speak in Japanese!  ;)