My second record.

I am very glad to my friends. They to me very much help to study English. It is sometimes very difficult to me to tell on English that that I mean. Sometimes it looks very ridiculously. But I will try! As, I am very glad to learn about you - my friends, about your life, about that where do you live, than are fond, it is very interesting to me. And I am simply glad is glad to communicate with you! Thank you that you at me are!

Oops, sorry! I forgot, try these rules Stas:

1. Try to use the least number of words.

2. Don't repeat words and try not to use the same word in the same sentence; except for the word "to."

3. Don't use "it is" anymore, instead use "it's."

Hope I was helpful.

My second record.

I am very glad to my friends. They to me very much help to study English. It is sometimes very difficult to me to tell on English that that I mean. Sometimes it looks very ridiculously. But I will try! As, I am very glad to learn about you - my friends, about your life, about that where do you live, than are fond, it is very interesting to me. And I am simply glad is glad to communicate with you! Thank you that you at me are!

I am very glad to my friends.

I am very thankful/grateful for my friends

They to me very much help to study English.

They are (they're) very helpful to me with studying English.

It is sometimes very difficult to me to tell on English that that I mean.

It is sometimes very difficult for me to say what I mean in English.

Sometimes it looks very ridiculously.

Sometimes it looks very ridiculous. (English speakers would probably not say the word "very" in this sentence. We would probably use a different adverb, like "really" or "totally" or "absolutely" or "pretty" but in this sentence, "very" doesn't sound quite right, even though it is technically correct.)

But I will try! As I am very excited to learn about you- my friends

But I will try, as I am very excited to learn about you, my friends- (This sentence is correct, but it should be combined into one sentence- Also, we usually will not start a sentence with the word "but," but that's okay for now :) )

about your life, about that where do you live, than are fond, it is very interesting to me.

About your life, where you live, what you are (you're) fond of- It is very interesting to me.

And I am simply glad is glad to communicate with you!

I am simply glad to communicate with you!

Thank you that you at me are!

Я не знаю, что ты хочел сказать, но ты можешь сказать просто "Thank you."

А молодец! Ты скоро будешь говорить по-английский отлично!

My second record.

I am very glad to my friends. They to me very much help to study English. It is sometimes very difficult to me to tell on English that that I mean. Sometimes it looks very ridiculously. But I will try! As, I am very glad to learn about you - my friends, about your life, about that where do you live, than are fond, it is very interesting to me. And I am simply glad is glad to communicate with you! Thank you that you at me are!

Corrections: I'm very thankful to my friends. They've been helping me study English a lot. Sometimes it's very difficult to understand my English because it looks ridiculous - but I will try! I'm very happy to learn about you, my friends - about your life and where you live. I'm simply glad to talk to you. Thank you.