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My English Diary: Day Six I live in a flat with my wife and our daughter, who is nineteen years old. Luckily, my wife bought the flat in the middle of the ninetys decade, before the spanish property boom. Thanks to that, we pay now a little morgage fee, but the flat is in a fifth floor with no stairs. I would like to rent or buy a better house, but the prices are yet too much expensive, and I`m afraid that, in the future, we might can't aford it. From 2007 the value of the houses is fallen from 30 to 40 per cent, but in the ten years before, it raised a 400 per cent, multiplying the cost by four! So at the moment, I have got to resing myself, and practice the sport of climb stairs, improving my heart's health! And I'm improving so my memory, because I never forget nothing, just to don't have to go up twice! :) I hope than, in the future, my family and me will move to a better place, near to the beach, with garage, a BBQ, and a basketball ring, and no stairs!

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My English Diary: Day Six

I live in a flat with my wife and our daughter, who is nineteen years old.
Luckily, my wife bought the flat in the middle of the ninetys decade nineties, before the Spanish property boom.

Thanks to that, we now pay now a little mortgage fee, but the flat is in a on the fifth floor with no stairs. (I'm not sure why you used "but" in this sentence. Where is the contradiction? Also, if there are no stairs, how do you access your house?)

I would like to rent or buy a better house, but the prices are yet too much still too expensive, and I`m afraid that, in the future, we might can't aford not be able to afford it.

From 2007 the value price (?) of the houses is has fallen from 30 to 40 per cent, but in the ten years before, it raised a 400 per cent, multiplying the cost by four!


So at the moment, I have got to resing resign myself, and practice the sport of climbing stairs, improving my heart's health! And I'm also improving so my memory, because I never forget nothing anything, just to don't have avoid having to go up twice! :)

I hope than, in the future, my family and me I will move to a better place, near to the beach, with a garage, a BBQ, and a basketball ring hoop, and no stairs!

(Excellent work, I enjoyed your writing very much! Let me know if you have any questions.)  

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Yes, Morgan, It was my fault! :) I tryed to say "no lift"
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In the second paragraph, when you say there are no "stairs," do you mean no "elevators" in the building?
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It's easy! She's the biological daughter of my wife, who is 39 years old.
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My English Diary: Day Six

I live in a flat with my wife and our daughter, who is nineteen years old.
Luckily, my wife bought the flat in the middle of the ninetys decade (you could also say "in the middle of the 1990's"), before the spanish property boom.

Thanks to that, we pay now a little have a low morgage fee, but the flat is in a on the fifth floor with no stairs.

I would like to rent or buy a better house, but the prices are yet too much still to expensive, and I`m afraid that, in the future, we might can't may not be able to aford it.

From 2007 the value of the houses is fallen fell from 30 to 40 per cent, but in the previous ten years before, it raised a the values rose 400 per cent, multiplying the cost by four!


So at the moment, I have got to resing myself to get up, and practice the sport of climbing stairs, improving my heart's health! And I'm also improving so my memory, because so I never forget nothing, just to don't and have to go up twice! :)

I hope than, in the future, my family and me I will move to a better place, near to the beach, with a garage, a BBQ, and a basketball ring, and no stairs!

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