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Something written again... What should I do, who should I be? What is in my capacity? The time will run, the days go by. A life does pass, oh, way to fast. And then becomes to short. Will anything that I will do ever be enough? I ask these questions every day. But answers… They come not. . . . But suddenly, A ray of light. I see first dim, then clear so white. I wonder…. Can I reach, or will I start to burn? And should I dear to try? I reason for a little while… Then leap into the sky. . . . Well, just to be clear, I have no knowledge of poems, at least not the theory of them, so this one does not follow any rules.. I'm just trying to express myself. Yeah...

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I thought it was very good.

 

And I don't tend to like other people's poetry.

 

Well done, especially in your second language.

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Thank you, I wil try. :)
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Continue to express yourself
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Nice one good
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Your thanks are greatly received. Your poem greatly perceived. Your worries greatly relieved. Your words greatly believed. Your arms greatly sleeved. :)))))

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