Something written again...
What should I do,
who should I be?
What is in my capacity?
The time will run,
the days go by.
A life does pass,
oh, way to fast.
And then becomes to short.
Will anything that I will do
ever be enough?
I ask these questions every day.
But answers…
They come not.
. . .
But suddenly, A ray of light.
I see first dim, then clear
so white.
I wonder….
Can I reach,
or will I start to burn?
And should I dear to try?
I reason for a little while…
Then leap into the sky.
. . .
Well, just to be clear, I have no knowledge of poems, at least not the theory of them, so this one does not follow any rules..
I'm just trying to express myself.
Yeah...
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I thought it was very good.
And I don't tend to like other people's poetry.
Well done, especially in your second language.
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Thank you, I wil try. :)
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Continue to express yourself
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Nice one good
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Your thanks are greatly received. Your poem greatly perceived. Your worries greatly relieved. Your words greatly believed. Your arms greatly sleeved. :)))))
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