what a beautiful day
Today, i saw my boyfriend by bus for one hour , i feel so tired because the weather is so hot and i don't drink water. Afernoon, we eat snacks and shopping , he always hold my hands to prove that he love me forever. With his love, I think I am the happiest person in the world.
Finally, let me here wish you all the happiness, also wishing for me .
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what a beautiful day!
Today, I met my boyfriend by the bus for one hour , I felt so tired because the weather was so hot and I didn't drink any water. In the afternoon, we ate snacks and went shopping .He always holds my hands to prove that he loves me forever. With his love, I think I am the happiest person in the world.
Finally, let me wish all of you here the happiness, also wishing for me .
(I decided to seperate some of the errors in tense using the color blue. Some of the corrections are minor, others I replaced some words with more appropriate words, however I could not quite interpret the last sentence clearly. Thank you for sharing such a happy experience with everyone)
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