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my vacation this year ,i take a part-time job . not only i think i am growing ,but also i can improve my skill .of course ,heihei, i can get more pocket money , then ,i can buy something i want but not buy for even .i konw many people ,and make many new friends .i learn too much from this exprierence. and i feel very happy

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This year, i am to take a part-time job. Not only I think I am growing, but I can also improve my skills. Of course, heihei, I can get more pocket money. Then, I can buy something I wanted to buy but I couldn't ( I don't understand the meaning of 'for even' here). I can get to know lots of people and make many new friends as well. I can learn a lot from this experience and for that, I feel very happy. This is just some simple way I'd make it. But just as a comment, I think you should state it clearly whether it's present tense or past tense..

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