Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Yes, I agree with the statement that sports and social activities are as important as class and libraries and should receive equal financial support. In my opinion, I thought that a good student can't only be concentrated on study or only on sports. Sports, social activities and class should be equally developed.
First, I think that everyone all needs to exercise every week because health is important to everyone. If you don’t have healthy body, not to mention that you want to have a good learning attitude.
And next, I believe that some students are so shy that they could fear to ask questions and talk with others. Therefore, Social activities are also important. Especially for students of college of Management, the social skill training is needed. And being a common undergraduate student, possessing the communicate skill is basic. So we can’t reduce the supports of social activities.
Need to say, the class is essential to a university. Student learning in class is direct learning way. So we still need to pay highly attention to this part.
Furthermore, students get the knowledge from the class. But if they have questions, the university needs to provide a good place to let them to explore the answers. So the library is vital. Library is student’s database. If graduate students want to collect some paper materials, they must come to library. So library’s paper and academic data should be very rich. And in this information exploding age, the data increases every year. So the finance provided for library can’t stop.
Finally, I believe the university takes good care of a student’s sports, social activities, class and library. And it must be help to student’s future. Because one person needs to learn so many things in life and not the whole needs to learn by class, sometimes by friends and society. So I agree that sports, society activities, class and library should get the same financial supports.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Yes, I agree with the statement that sports and social activities are as important as class and libraries and should receive equal financial support. In my opinion, I think that a good student shouldn't only concentrated on studying or only on sports. Sports, social activities and classes should be equally developed.
First, I think that everyone all needs to exercise every week because health is important to everyone. If you don’t have a healthy body, not to mention that you won't to have a good learning attitude.
And next, I believe that some students are so shy that they could fear to asking questions and talking with others. Therefore, social activities are also important. Especially for students in the college of Management, the social skill training is needed. And being a common undergraduate student, possessing the communicative skills is necessary. So we can’t reduce the supports of social activities.
Needless to say, the class is essential in university. Student learning in class is direct learning way. So we still need to pay a lot of attention to this part.
Furthermore, students get the knowledge from taking classes. But if they have questions, the university needs to provide a good place to let them to explore the answers. So the library is vital. The library is the students' database. If graduate students want to collect some paper materials, they must come to the library. So the library’s paper and academic data should be very rich. And in this exploding information age, the data increases every year. So the finances provided for the libraries shouldn't stop.
Finally, I believe the university should takes good care of their students' sports, social activities, classes and libraries. Also, it must be there to help to the students' future. Because one person needs to learn so many things in life and not everything can be learned in class, but sometimes through friends and society. So I agree that sports, society activities, classes and libraries should get the same financial supports.
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