My first record!

I live in Ivanovo. It is not very big, but beautiful city.And very much it to be pleasant to me! I work and study. I study at univercity.I like the United States! At you it is very beautiful! And there are a lot of kind people! Sometime I surely will arrive to you on excursion.

Corrections: I live in Ivanovo, Russia. It's not very big but it's a beautiful and pleasant city to me. Currently I'm a university student and also working on the side. I like the United States. It's very beautiful and there are a lot of kind people. Some day I'll no doubt travel to the United States.

The mistake a lot of people make is using too many words. Also try writing a sentence without chopping it up with punctuations. For example: "I work and study. I study at a university." That can be put into one sentence like I did above.

Another thing is instead of saying "it is," "I will," "can not", etc, put them together:

It is = it's

I will = I'll

Can not = Can't

Will not = Won't

etc..