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watching the U.S.A through skype this afternoon via skype, I could see my love going with her mom and sister to the gas station for soda :) she showed me the place where she bought her truck at. when they were going back to their house, my wife´s mom almost got hit by a car. due to the other person wanted to cross over after her. but thanks god, everything is alright.

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watching the U.S.A through skype

(Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence) this afternoon via skype, I could see my love going with her mom and sister to the gas station for soda :) <----(A comma "," needs to go here)  she showed me the place where she bought her truck at. when they were going back to their house, my wife´s mom almost got hit by a car . <----(A comma "," needs to go here) due to the other person wanted to cross over after her . <--(NO) but thanks god, everything is alright.

Looking at the U.S.A through skype.

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his afternoon via skype, I could see my love going with her mom and sister to the gas station for soda :), then she showed me the place where she bought her truck. When they were going back to their house, my wife's mom almost got hit by a car, due to the other person wanted to cross over after her but thank God everything is alright.


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