Travel in Si Chuan of China.
A few days ago，I went out to travel with my loder sister in Lu Gu Lake of Si Chuan ,there was very beautiful and I was fall in love with there. Local the minority are so kind and enthusiasm。But there is little cold ,the coldest is only 14℃,So you must wear coat in there.However in my hometown is humid，so I can't adapt to there at once 。
Now I have leave here , but it In my dream is very clear。
I hope I can go to here once again.
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Travel in Si Chuan of China.
A few days ago，I traveled with my older sister to Lu Gu Lake of Si Chuan. It isvery beautiful here and I fell in love with this area. The local residents are so kind and enthusiastic. But it is cold there, the coldest is temperature is 14℃, so you must wear a coat there. However, in my hometown it is humid，so I can't adapt toI he climate there immediately。
Now I have to leave here , but this place will stay clearly in my dreams.
I hope I can come back to visit again.
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Hi Estelle,
I made two corrections to your post. Please disregard the first correction, I posted too quickly and there are still some errors in it.
I enjoyed reading what you wrote about Lu Gu Lake in Si Chuan. It sounds like a lovely place.
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Travel in Si Chuan of China.
A few days ago，I traveled with my older sister to Lu Gu Lake in Si Chuan. It is very beautiful here and I have fallen in love with this area. The local residents are so kind and enthusiastic. But it is cold here, the coldest temperature is 14℃, so you must wear a coat. However in my hometown it is humid，so I can't adapt to the climate here immediately.
Now I have to leave here, but this place will stay with me in my dreams.
I hope I can come back to visit again.
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