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what i am expecting
it has been 4 weeks since i left home.i missed my hometown so much,especially my family and my families` deliciouse dishes. so when i know that my friends have got some cooking tools,i feel graet. that means i can make some dish of my hometown this weekend, i am looking forward it so much.big show time hahhaha
What I'm expecting.
It has been 4 weeks since I left home. I miss my hometown so much, especially my family and my family's delicious dishes. So when I knew that my friends have some cooking utensils, I felt great (Or: it made me feel great). That means I can make some dishes (Or: a dish) of my hometown this weekend. I am looking forward to it a lot. Big show time hahhaha.
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