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my nails
Hi everyone.
Its Ssummer!( It is summer where? In Japan? please write a more detailed sentence) I hate hot weather, but I do like the Ssummer months:)
I bought some nail polishes.
What do you think of my new nails?
I like them it!
Have a great Ssummer everyone.
Basically your story is correct but really lacks substance. For the purpose of learning, and that is why we are all here, please try to write more details and expand on your descriptions. For example, you could write the reasons you like summer. Take a risk on writing a lot more in your entries so you can discover where you need to focus your study, you will learn much faster this way. I want you to become very good at English.
By the way, your nails look great!
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