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To take our country- China as an example, we have /*#1 achieved to be*/ succeded in becoming the second largest economy in the world. To some extent, we are so successful, but we have paid heavy price for those. Damage to the environment and consumption for nonrenewable natural resource are the main problems we /* #2 faced*/ face /*#3 while*/ with the rapid development of our economy. So for long extent, we are not so successful. Even we are overdrafting our future and the rapid development speed can last long.
#1 - "-ed" this ending is correct because it indicates something that happened in the past. 这儿后面的那个东东表现已经过去的事情但上下文"the second largest economy in the world" 是现代的。怎么交接呢?看来你要用"be"这个动词但是"be"要改变到"becoming". 但是我们不说"achieved in becoming" 这儿不好听"succeded in becoming"一样的意思。很不错!
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