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The interior gym Our school has a bic interior gym. Because our school has a narrow outside yard. To run a circle the track take time to 1minute. And consequently to make interior gym. The gym facility has nice and newest. Almost things like equipments and supported facilites have automatical system. Exemple, I have only to push the button as the basketball backboard is up or down. Tommorow It will be taken the debated contest. It is difficult that I'm preparing by myself.

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The Interior Gym --> 제목은 보통 대문자를 씁니다. 않 쓸때는: a, an, or, the, and... 하지만 제목에 처음 단어 이면 대문자 씁니다. 

 

Our school has a big interior gym. --> Good

Because But our school has we have a narrow outside yard.

("Our school"을 처음 문장에 썼으니까 또 않써도 됩니다.)

To run a circle around the track takes time to 1 minute.


And consequently to make interior gym.
(무슨 말을 하고 싶은지 잘 모르겠네요 ^^)


The gym facility has is nice and newest. brand new.


Almost things like all of the equipments and supported facilities have automatical automated systems. 



Exemple For example, I have only to push the one button as for the basketball backboard is to go up or down.



Tommorow It will be taken the debated contest.
(여기도 잘 몰르겠습니다.)


It is difficult that I'm preparing by myself. --> Good

 

 

저는 한국말을 잘 못해서 잘 이예할지 모르겠네요. 굼굼한거 있으면 말해주세요. 잘썼읍니다. 열심히하세요!

 

 

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