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The Interior Gym --> 제목은 보통 대문자를 씁니다. 않 쓸때는: a, an, or, the, and... 하지만 제목에 처음 단어 이면 대문자 씁니다.
Our school has a big interior gym. --> Good
Because But our school has we have a narrow outside yard.
("Our school"을 처음 문장에 썼으니까 또 않써도 됩니다.)
To run a circle around the track takes time to 1 minute.
And consequently to make interior gym.
(무슨 말을 하고 싶은지 잘 모르겠네요 ^^)
The gym facility has is nice and newest. brand new.
Almost things like all of the equipments and supported facilities have automatical automated systems.
Exemple For example, I have only to push the one button as for the basketball backboard is to go up or down.
Tommorow It will be taken the debated contest.
(여기도 잘 몰르겠습니다.)
It is difficult that I'm preparing by myself. --> Good
저는 한국말을 잘 못해서 잘 이예할지 모르겠네요. 굼굼한거 있으면 말해주세요. 잘썼읍니다. 열심히하세요!
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