A meaningful book!
I recently read a great book. It called <<secret>>.It affact(or change) my life. I can feel happier.
which there is one important rule:called the law of attraction.
It tells us that our life are created( Or make?) by our own thoughts.
I would like to share with you about that all.
I hope it can make you feel happier.
hehe,my English is poor.Please help me.thanks.
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A meaningful book!
I recently read a great book. It is called Secret. It affected (or changed - either is OK) my life. I feel happier.
It teaches that there is one important rule called The Law of Attraction.
It tells us that our lives are (or - our life is) created(or made - again, either is OK) by our own thoughts.
I would like to share with you all about that.
I hope it can make you feel happier.
hehe,my English is poor.Please help me.thanks.
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