August 8th 2012

Today is a “yes” day. The weather is nice. I stayed at home in the morning and i cooked breakfast and lunch myself . I ate corn and yogurt for breakfast and fried eggs with ham sausage for lunch. The fried eggs with ham sausage tasteless . I am not good at cooking but I practice more in my summer vocation .
In the afternoon I received a call from one who are the student of mine when I were a cadet teacher .it’s really a big surprise to me .he is a big boy now and four years ago he was just in senior one. Although we haven’t seen each other for about four years but we didn’t have strange feeling .we drunk in Macdonald’s . Macdonald’s were just having a funny game for supporting the 2012 Olympic Games, boys and girls jumped into this game . of course he was one of the activists, i saw smile and confidence in their face , how good is to be young!
After he went back home I went to the University Of Nanhua alone. so many people played basketball here. I sat besides the basketball court. Young man , old man , kids ……they ran ,they punched ,the shouted ,they laughed ,they sweated here ,when they jumped and shot ,they just liked stronger jumping notes . oh I couldn’t sop my heart :I really want to be one of them I had to do some sports .i wanted to riding so terrible. I had to get out for some fresh air and fresh viewpoint .
Who want to ride with me? I will on my way to ride around all over my city tomorrow.
Surround me deeply again , wonderful for world . good night.

Hi Eli,

I hope this is helpful... There are just a couple of sentences were I didn't really understand what you were trying to say? (highlighted in blue) otherwise, good job!

Today is a “Yes!” day. The weather is nice. I stayed at home in the morning and I cooked myself breakfast and lunch. I ate corn and yogurt for breakfast and fried eggs with ham sausage for lunch. The fried eggs with ham sausage were tasteless . I am not good at cooking but I shall practice more during my summer vacation .(vocation = job/career)
In the afternoon I received a call from a fellow student of mine who I trained? with  as a cadet teacher .It was a really big surprise.  Four years ago he was just in senior one but now he is grown up. Although we haven’t seen each other for about four years there was no anxiety or awkwardness. We drank __?__ (what did you drink?) in Macdonald’s . Macdonald’s had organised a funny game for supporting the 2012 Olympic Games, boys and girls were quick to participate in this game . Of course my old friend  was one of the first participants, I saw smiles and confidence in the childrens faces , how good it is to be young!
After my friend went back home I went to the University Of Nanhua alone. So many people played basketball here. I sat besides the basketball court. Young men , old men , kids ……they ran ,they punched ,the shouted ,they laughed ,they sweated together here ,when they jumped and took a shot ,they just liked stronger jumping notes? (I don't understand this sentence?). Oh I couldn’t stop my heart, I really wanted to be one of them, I had to do some sports. I wanted to go riding so terribly. I had to get out for some fresh air and a fresh viewpoint .
Who wants to ride with me? I will go? on my way and ride all around my city tomorrow.
Surround me deeply again (I don't understand this?) , "Good night" wonderful world!.

regards

IncaKola