Trying to translate my poem...
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Oh Diana, how the stars offend thee,
Marring the perfection of your fair face
Turn away into the sky
Hide thy light
Cover the forest in darkness
A Diana , kak zvezdy soblaznyaet tebya,
Maringa sovershenstva vashyeii spravedlivoii litso
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skrytt svoi svet
okhvatyve les v temnote
I don't know...
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Trying to translate my poem...
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Oh Diana, how the stars offend thy beauty,
Marring the perfection of thy fair face.
Turn away from the sky
Hide thy light ,
Cover the forest in darkness
At present your poem sounds like a lovely old fashioned English poem like Shakespeare or John Donne used to write.Was this the sort of effect you were hoping to achieve?
A Diana , kak zvezdy soblaznyaet tebya,
Maringa sovershenstva vashyeii spravedlivoii litso
?
skrytt svoi svet
okhvatyve les v temnote
I don't know...
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Thank you Jonni. I will look at that.
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Yes Andrusha! Only the beautiful parts of nature though. Nature can also sometimes be unkind and unmerciful. ;-) Also my favorite Greek/Roman Goddess is Artemis/Diana. She is the Goddess of the Hunt... of the Moon... She is also one of the 3 Vestal Virgin Goddesses (the other two are Athena and Hestia). I love the mythological stories about how she uses her silver poison tipped arrows to deliver a quick and painless death to the animals being hunted. She is also known to turn Virgins into tree Nymphs if they are fleeing some unwanted man chasing after them. She is a Goddess that is merciful and humane. She does not like suffering. She also has a special affintiy to the dear. I don't know. I just love her the most out of all the Greek/Roman dieties.
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О Диана, звёзды покусились на тебя
Что сравниться могут красотой с твоим лицом
Отвернитесь же обратно, в небеса
Скройте свет,
В темноте оставьте лес
you're a nature lover!
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Hei! If you have no Russian keyboard layout, try http://www.translit.ru/.
Then we could try again to do something. It breaks the eyes with this kind of writing. :P
Turn away into the sky - Вернись/возвратись обратно на небо
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