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“A person’s mental health is more important than physical health.” Do you agree? I do not agree that a person’s mental health is more important than physical health. In my opinion, both of them are important. If a person lack of mental health or physical health, he become to a sickness person. With regard to mental health, in recently year, different institute had been found out that most of Hong Kong citizens have a different level mental problem. Some people have a serious of it. So they need a treatment for get a normally life back. Mental problem may come from a various pressure such as the pressure come from life, work, study, etc. About the pressure come from life, a small city more than seven million people to live. Hong Kong is one of them. For example, some families have too many people living in a small flat; in some holidays a lot of shops have many people to go for eating, playing, shopping; etc. Hong Kong’s environment makes difference people who have various level of pressure. Hong Kong people are hard work and smart that is bring much mental pressure to worker whatever in different industry. People’s hard work and smart make that people should do everything which is in the best. If people cannot work in the best, they may be dismissed by employer. Work is one of the paths that the pressures come from. Work has big competition; university also has many students to compete a degree. If they want into university, they must hard than another student. So Hong Kong’s student is suffering heavy pressure. Every year Hong Kong has many people ask for help to deal with the pressure whatever teenager or adults. If a person is loss mental health, he could happen a lot of things as the newspaper always report that a person was been killed by other person who has a mental problem; a person was been suicide; etc. In my opinion, a lot of time people need to ask for help from other one, they also need to learn that how they can help their self. For example, how to deal with pressure; how to eliminate anxious when face up something; etc. Physical health it also is important as mental health. When a person was born, he needs to face up that the death follows up the born. If a person is losing physical health, he will be a sick person. He can not do a lot of things, because he was lost him physical health. If a sick person cannot recovery their physical, he will die more quickly than has a physical health person. Every people when they were both, they are in a different health situation and then the sick may follows up to th

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