On a Summer Morning

Today I went to the station by bike! ("go" is present tense, you are speaking about the past, so use "went" which is past tense =D)

It's too hot. ("tooooo" isn't correct English but is often used casually to exaggerate e.g: ほんとほんとあついいいい！！)

I sweat easily. It always troubles me. Can anyone stop my embarrassment?

But I love summer more than the other seasons because school is out for a long holiday. ("the others" is a little confusing and ambiguous あいまい)

What I'm going to do this summer is go to the annual summer festivals and walk beside the seashore in the sunshine. I can't swim. My parents told me when I was a child (baby?), I almost drowned. (1-2 years old = baby. 2+ years = young child, 5+ years = child. That is an estimate, not a rule)

This experience has had a bad influence on my subconscious so I always observe my classmates swimming in PE class. ("Observe" is not wrong but "watch" would sound more natural)

I have to do my homework this summer too. I don't like to calculate mathematical formulae. (formulae or formulas is the plural of formula)

People often say "great geniuses leave great gifts". I think, for me, it's just mere homework.

I'd be glad if someone corrected my English!!!

Very good work! がんばって！
休みはたのしいですね。

On a Summer Morning

Today I went to the station on my bike! It's too hot, and I sweat easily. It always troubles me. Can anyone else stop my embarrassment? But I love summer better than the other seasons because school is out for long holidays. What I'm going to do this summer is go to the annual summer festivals and walk beside the seashore in the sunshine. I can't swim, though. My parents told me that when I was child, I almost drowned. This experience had a bad influence on my subconscious. I always observe classmates swimming in PE class, though. I have to do my homework this summer too. I don't like to calculate mathematical formulas. People often say that great geniuses leave behind a great legacy. I think, as for me, it's just mere homework.

I'm glad if someone correct my English!!!

Good work! Keep it up! はんばってください！