Bullying! How strange it is, almost any word on english can became in a verb. Anyway, the story what I want to share today is about a little girl named Nadia who got a big ears, so their class mattes

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Bullying! How strange it is, almost any word on english can became in a verb. Anyway, the story what I want to share today is about a little girl named Nadia who got a big ears, so their class mattes called her dumbo (at the age of 10 years old). I know the kids are too cruel, so she wanted a cosmetic surgery to fix her ears then at the age of 14 a non-profit organization said to her yes, we can do it for you and also the doctor said we can change other parts of your face. So the other underlying part of the story is: what we should learn in life?, not everything can be corrected by a surgery, there are things we cannot change and we have to learn how deal and bear them. If you want to watch it is in the link down below beetwen the minutes 2:31-4:05 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOCyxapyN_0 I'm waiting your corrections and comments

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Bullying!

How strange it is, almost any word on english can became in become a verb. Anyway, the story what I want to share today is about a little girl named Nadia who got a has big ears, so their her class mates called her dumbo (at the age of 10 years old). I know The kids are too cruel. So, she (Nadia) wanted a cosmetic surgery to fix her ears. Then at the age of 14 a non-profit organization said to her, "Yes, we can do it for you and also the doctor said we can change other parts of your face."

So the other underlying part question of the story is: what we should we learn in life? Not everything can be corrected by a surgery; there are things we cannot change and we have to learn how deal with and bear them.

If you want to watch it is in the link down below beetwen the minutes 2:31-4:05

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOCyxapyN_0

I'm waiting your corrections and comments

thanks Syriana for read my entry :)

That's a great topic ! I agree you, I think people should learn how to deal with hard things instead of changing them.

Yes I have, why is it the verb have (has) instead of the past in the sentence: who has big ears,? and why did you erase the words 'I know'? And here in Chile the bullying is also a big problem

Bullying is such a big deal in the United States right now. We have entire organizations and even government committees committed to ending bullying, in schools, workplaces, and even the internet! I wish Nadia could have had the self confidence to love that her ears make her unique! I wouldn't want to have surgery to blend in with everyone else. If you have questions about the corrections I made for you, feel free to ask! ^^ Good job!!

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